literature

i'm so sorry

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Literature Text

how many times will it take you to know i'm sorry
how many times will it take you to know i mean it
how much time will i have to bear this sadness
how many times do you have to make me cry

because i think of you before i go to sleep at night
because i think of you when i see the street lights
you might not know it, i may not show it
but i just do

don't go away, please just stay
i know i did something wrong
tell me what i did wrong
don't ... go
I NEVER WROTE FOR A CRUSH BEFORE OMG

I know it's crappy, but I just scribbled it down for a few minutes and voila! It's here.

IF ANYONE SENT HIM A LINK TO THIS I WILL DIE (Not really, and I'm plaguing ye with caps!)

Alrighty. Fav and comment and watch and I shall send you a llama if I haven't sent one to you already.
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naked-in-the-rain's avatar
This poem is really about beautiful human emotions. It's about love and leaving. I like how you ask yourself questions making a reader wonder about their own sadness and grief. Love does make you cry. I have to add that the ending is rather effective and I like how you expressed your feelings and longing in just two words "don't go". Very pretty poem.