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Commission: She Hunts Alone

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Come, and let us read the tale of Silverfang
Joining her in her adventure, she hunts alone
She searches for friends she could call hers
She wishes to be in a place where she could feel like at home
And as she looks at the stars in the night sky, she knows that someday
That she will be at home, that she shall find a home someday

She hunts around, searches around, runs around
And the world goes by and by
And looks for something – anything – that looks friendly enough
She waits for them to approach her, but no one seems to do so
Unsatisfied, she retreats to the dark and
She looks up at the night skies and gaze at the stars

The stars could always calm her down
They always can, they always will
It's like there was something out there in the world
That made them especially for her
And with that, she is grateful
And her eyes close, as she falls into a deep sleep

Years go by and by, but things stay the same
She grows older and older, and by that time
She almost gave up on searching for friends
She continues to travel and hunt on her own
And she has high hopes on finding pack mates soon
That would be magnificent, would it not?

But this I promise to you, Silverfang
One night, you shall look up at the stars
And stare into the horizon of the world afar
You will find pack mates soon, I'm sure
This … I promise to you
*TheLupinearRider, I apologize if it isn't to your liking. This is my first real commission and I guess ... I just wanted you to read it right now. You can use it anytime you want, like if you're gonna write a story about her or something. If you need a poem for the beginning, well ... I'm free! :dummy: :tighthug: But really, honestly, thanks for commissioning! (Is that even a word? Oh well!)

I hope you likey! Apologies if I did anything wrong, really.

Yes, you can use it with my permission and with my credit. Poems aren't really my best works of literature, so I have no idea why you think I'm one of the best, really.

What did I just scribble? :dummy:
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This...is...absolutly....PERFECT!!! You did an amazing, no wonderful- no ASTOUNDING job! and trust me ythe way you wrote this I definitly am using it for my book ^^ Thank you again and i still stand by What i said, you are one of the best!!! ^^

I will commision you again soon, trust me ^^